Mai and the Old Man

 


Full Story: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jRYLpPEba9Md3TXRn7XoAcUQUbDwFP8a/view?usp=sharing

Like an idiot, I deleted the PSDs for this one. Oh well. 

So this was my first comic, and it was really fucking basic. Stagnant lighting, basic ass colors, stiff poses, etc., etc.. That being said, I still think there's something sort of 'pure' about it in a weird way. Probably just because it embodies all the shit I'm into in the most basic way. 

I will undoubtedly do a remaster of this in the future and get better lighting/color, more pages and better choreography overall. I'm looking forward to doing that since I still like these two together and want to do a bit better job of pairing them up.

Anyway, Nitoru is the janitor at Mai's school and followed her to the train station. When she ducked into a bathroom he saw an opportunity and seized it. Mai is your standard pretty, popular girl. Good grades, good at sports, fashionable, beautiful, nice to people, etc. Generally well liked by the whole school, though not necessarily the MOST popular girl there.

I might even just do a sequel or something to do this. I don't know. The future is a mystery, but it's a fun one.

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  1. A shriyanNovember 16, 2021 at 1:42 PM

    Pretty cool to see how you've improved over time, man I'd absolutely love to install Honey Select 2 and make my own comics like yours, only problem is, my pc isn't exactly a personal computer, even my brother uses it and I don't want him to find out I'm making porn comics lmao

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    1. VerticalBoxNovember 16, 2021 at 2:02 PM

      Lol I wouldn't want anyone I know finding out about this. Honestly, though, you don't need anything super strong. I just use a pretty cheap laptop and that works for me. Plus, it's good to have something you're saving towards getting. Message me when you make your first comic. It'll be fun to read.

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    2. A shriyanNovember 17, 2021 at 6:58 AM

      Oh I'm not worried about the power of my pc, it's literally a gaming pc after all , just that if i install anything like that my family will find out

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