Nanako and the Brat

 

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Well this one turned out longer than expected. For a little while I was thinking it might even be longer than Tomo and the Train Molester, but then it... wasn't. It came close, though!

This was originally going to be sort of a tribute to Almarosso, who's one of my favorite artists. He does a lot of ugly shota work that I really, really like even if the art is kinda rough a lot of times. He's an excellent example of 'content over presentation', where maybe the doujins don't LOOK the best, but the story, characters and overall content is really, really good.

Anyway, that's not really what this turned out to be. Part way through I decided to specifically make Daiki NOT a child, so that kinda throws the whole 'tribute' thing out the window. Daiki is really just a small, angry, sexually frustrated eighteen-year-old. I know he sort of seems to talk/think like he has Tourette Syndrome, but he doesn't. He's just a weird, angry little dude.

So my tribute to Almarosso will have to wait for now. I plan on making 'tribute' works to some other of my favorite doujin artists in the future, drawing heavy inspiration for the stories from their bigger works. I'm sure I'll get around to doing ones for guys like Charu, NTRMan, Kitahara Aki and Tamagoro. And Xration, of course, because he is THE MAN.

Anyway.

I liked writing Nanako. I realize the story may be a bit too comedic at times, given how much of an airhead she is, but it was just... fun. And I think she was a good foil to an incel like Daiki.

And I finally got to do one of those 'fucking all over the place' montages. I think there's a word for it (or a Subreddit or something) but I can't remember it. Either way, I liked it.

Random Facts that Don't Matter Time:

-The game was Fire Emblem: Three Houses and the character Daiki was talking to was Dedue. He, of course, simps for Edelgard. 

-Nanako's thirty-four and works as a gym teacher. She's actually the head of Sanada and Ren's track team, having replaced the previous coach after he retired. Aoba's in, like, her mid-forties but has aged rather gracefully. Daiki is eighteen.

-Nanako's had sex with only three other men, despite what Daiki thinks. Two were boyfriends, and the most recent was an English backpacker who was in the country to climb Mt. Fuji. That was her only real 'fling'. Her usual type is - what I can only describe as - Hiroshi Tanahashi.

-This bonus takes place roughly eighteen years in the past. Aoba used to babysit Nanako a lot and developed a very strong attraction towards her. The two had sex a few times, but Nanako doesn't really remember it. Not because it was so traumatic she blocked it out or something, she just... doesn't. She just thinks of it as fun stuff they used to do together, and nothing more. Aoba pretty quickly realized Nanako was straight, despite everything and ended up marrying one of her coworkers.

-Daiki is not actually that guy's son, though, he's the son of an affair between Aoba and her boss. That in and of itself could be its own comic, but I probably won't make it since... I don't feel like it. Aoba's cute and I like how she looks, but I wouldn't want to make a full length comic about her. Part of what I like about her is that she's not the most conventionally cute girl I've ever made.

-Yes, Nanako is (attempting) to sing the theme song from Yuru Camp here, though she hasn't actually watched the show.