Ogawa and the Old Man

 


Full Story: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tgh2QPw0olXmdLcIBw9PQuZb9_5pfzsp/view?usp=sharing

RAWs: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wtrMBeM5laqSZk4fqKWGtNFsWr873Zc-/view?usp=sharing

It's a terrible looking title card, honestly, but oh well. 

I actually really like this one, even though it's from pretty early on. Ogawa's somehow both cute and hot, which I think really works in this case. I also liked her boss. I think he's a good foil, being a creep who kind of worships Ogawa while also wanting to do terrible things to her. 

Again, this is just before I figured out lighting and screen effects so it all looks kind of harsh, but I don't think it detracts too much from the story. Risa was the point where I finally figured all that stuff out which is why - in my opinion - it actually looks alright.

I plan on doing a follow-up story in the future, following a new hire at the branch. It's loosely inspired by an Arakure doujin that follows roughly similar progression.

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