Tomo and the Train Molester


Full Story: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DxqxC6aUB69uMIeWNyYfjAcouGGvKbDp/view?usp=sharing

I can't believe how late this STORY ran. But it's finally complete. 200+ pages, but it's finished. Half of it's talking, which isn't great, but what can you do?

I realize it's weird to have a story based on a Chikan event where there's no actual Chikan, but... I dunno. That's how it goes sometimes. Though it DOES give me an idea for a FUTURE story that could be really good. 

Anyway, like I said, I might do Misuzu/Misaki/Ferris in the future, I might do another Tomo. Probably won't do Carol, since she's kind of... not my type. Weird, since she used to be my favorite, but something about her's a bit too 'cloying' for me. She feels kind of Barbie-ish, and not in a good way. Not that she's not cute, she's just probably not gonna get her own story.

AND BY MISAKI I MEAN GUNDOU'S MOM, NOT MISAKI AS IN CAROL'S LOVE INTEREST.

Weird that they have the same name...

ENJOY.

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  1. A shriyanNovember 21, 2021 at 3:56 AM

    Indeed there's a lot of talking, but that makes this comic even better, the build up was really nice. Tomo blushing was hella cute to me for some reason. Anyways I'm no comic critique but either way great story, great ending.

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    1. VerticalBoxNovember 21, 2021 at 5:54 AM

      All my favorite doujins have really good build-up, so I definitely agree. To me good build-up can almost be better than good payoff. And Tomo blushing is cute because cute tomboys blushing is cute. Preeetty simple, really.
      Anyway, glad you liked it, Shri.

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    2. A shriyanNovember 21, 2021 at 8:15 AM

      Yup exactly. Also do you plan on posting the newer comics to some websites like e-h-----.org well I can't type the name since Google keeps removing my comment.
      ( Hope you know what site I'm talking about )

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    3. VerticalBoxNovember 21, 2021 at 2:10 PM

      Yup. It'll go up on the big E-H soon. I usually wait a week before posting them there, though. Ideally I'd like to figure out how to host my own picture galleries on this site, but that's a bit of a complicated process.

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